Wednesday, December 15, 2010

Erosion and Weathering Concept Poem



What if weathering and erosion had a personality? What would they be like? Share your poems :)


8 comments:

  1. Isis- Mrs. J-F's ClassDecember 15, 2010 at 6:54 AM

    Erosion Concept Poem

    Erosion is black. It tastes like salty water. It smells like dead animals. For fun it likes to make big waves. Although people swimming on him makes him angry, and when people don't like him makes it sad. When it changes the Earth's surface makes it happy.

    Erosion is smaller than the sun but bigger than me. Rocks are its worst enemy and weathering is its best friend.

    Erosion likes to keep peebles in the beach, since this is its favorite place, but would never think to keep peebles in the water. Its greatest accomplishment is the Grand Canyon, while its greatest failure is when glaciers accidently kill people. Erosion makes me feel excited beacuse it created the Grand Canyon!

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  2. Roberto- Mrs. J-F's ClassDecember 15, 2010 at 7:02 AM

    Erosion Concept Poem

    Erosion is black. It tastes like dust.It smells like rotten food. For fun it likes to just destroy stuff. Although growing plants for the dirt makes it angry, and when weathering taking his spot light makes it sad, moving the rocks makes it happy.

    Erosion is smaller than an ant but bigger than the Earth. The aliens are its worst enemy,and weathering is its best friend.

    Erosion likes to keep a super villan cave at the beach, since this is its favorite place ,and would never think to keep the aliens in a super villan cave. Its greatest accomplishment is to change the Grand Canyon, while its greatest failure is not getting the dirt from one place to another. Erosion makes me feel famous because I know ALL about Erosion!

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  3. Kevin- Mrs. J-F's ClassDecember 16, 2010 at 7:13 AM

    Erosion Concept Poem

    Erosion is gray. It tastes like squishy mud. It smells like trash. For fun it likes to make fresh air. Although plants make it angry,and when weathering does not do his job it makes it sad, making twisters makes it happy.

    Erosion is smaller than an ant, but bigger than the sun. Kevin Rubio is its worst enemy,and weathering is its best friend.

    Erosion likes to keep a super hero cave in the sea, since this is its favorite place,and would never think to keep Kevin Rubio in super hero cave. Its greatest accompleshment is changing the Earth, while its greatest failure is not blowing the dirt. Erosion makes me feel evil because it destroys homes.

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  4. Karla- Mrs. J-F's ClassDecember 16, 2010 at 7:20 AM

    Waethering Concept Poem

    Weathering is gray. It tastes likes squishy dirt. It smells like rotten frogs. For fun it likes to hit people in their faces with rocks!

    Although when you say bad stuff about it makes it angry, and when it can't break rocks makes it sad, when it can break a lot of rocks makes it happy.

    Its smaller than a beetle, but bigger than a giant. Its worst enemy is me because I am mean. Its Best friend is Erosion because they are a team.

    Weathering keeps stuff that he needs like water,ice, and wind in the Grand Canyon since this is its favorite place, and would never think to keep these things in the sun because it would burn them up! Its greatest accomplishment is the Grand Canyon while its greatest failure is when he slowly destroys parts of the Earth. Weathering makes me feel sad and happy at the same time.

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  5. Armando- Mrs. J-F's ClassDecember 17, 2010 at 6:34 AM

    Erosion Concept Poem

    Erosion is brown. It tastes like sand blowing in the air. It smells like smoke coming out of a machine. For fun, it likes to change places to look funny. Although humans trying to stop or slow him down makes him angry and plants slowing him down makes him sad, changing the face of the Earth makes him happy!

    It is smaller than a giant, but bigger than a beetle. Its worst enemy are humans and its best friend is eathering because they work together to change landforms.

    Erosion likes to keep water, ice, and dirt buried in the soil, since this is its favorite place, and would never think to keep water, ice, and dirt with plants. Its greatest accomplishment is when it changes the Earth's surface and its greatest failure is when it hurts other living things. Erosion makes me feel happy because I can visit new places it has changed into cool looking shapes.

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  6. Yoni- Mrs. J-F's ClassDecember 17, 2010 at 6:46 AM

    Erosion Concept Poem

    Erosion is gray. It tastes like salty dirt. It smells like wet dirt. For fun it likes to moves rocks. Although the wind blowing on him makes it angry, if he doesn't move anything makes him sad, when people like him because he works hard makes him happy.

    Erosion is smaller than a rock, but bigger than a tree. Plants are its enemy because they slow him down and weathering is his best friend because they work together.

    Erosion likes to keep small rocks in the Grand Canyon, since this is his favorite place, and would never think to keep small rocks in the water. Its greatest accomplishment is changing the Earth's surface. It's greatest failure is when it destroys parts of the Earth. Erosion makes me feel happy and sad because he makes the Earth look really cool but it can destroy it too.

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  7. Nayeli- Mrs. J-F's ClassDecember 17, 2010 at 7:03 AM

    EROSION CONCEPT POEM

    Erosion is brown. It tastes like a salt. It smells like an animal. For fun it likes to move like a doll being shaken. Although when small rocks don't move fast enough makes it angry, when people don't like it makes it sad. Moving rocks makes it happy.

    Its smaller than a drop of water, but bigger than a big rock. Its worst emeny are humans. Its best friend is weathering. It likes to keep dirt and rocks in the Earth, since this is its favorite place, and would never think to keep dirt and rocks in plants because he cant move them.

    Its greatest accomplishment is making Miami beach. While its greatest failure is when he breaks down mountains. Weathering makes me feel happy because it can make new places.

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  8. Joselin- Mrs. J-F's ClassDecember 17, 2010 at 7:09 AM

    Weathering concept poem

    Weathering is gray. It tastes like salt. It smells like stinky fish. For fun it likes to hit people in the face with small rocks. Although when people talk about him makes it angry, and when they make fun of him makes it sad, when it can break more rocks makes it happy.

    Weathering is smaller than erosion, but bigger than children and grown-ups. Gravity is its worst enemy, and glaciers is its best friend.

    Erosion likes to keep rocks in a secret hiding place since this is its favorite place, and would never think to keep the Grand Canyon in his secret hiding place. Its greatest accomplishment is helping create the Grand Canyon, while its greatest failure is when it can no longer break dwn rocks. Weathering makes me feel sad and happy.

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